Re-Write

Alternate Ending… 3pts

Pg.66

“Take it easy. Lie right out in the water. Don’t try to swim. I’ll tow you in.”

Call the guard I beg of you, he can call me an ambulance! They can rush me to the hospital and you can meet me there. Please, I love you but, please I need you to do this.

Once I got her to shore, I comforted her until the ambulance showed up. They believe her pain was due to stress induced contractions and that she would need to be taken to the hospital to try to prevent a miscarriage. I kissed her on the forehead and ran to the car so that I could meet her at the hospital.

There was a stand still on the way, I got stuck behind this car, I honked but there was no way to pass him. On the left there were cars coming towards me and I had no intention of slowing down for my love, so I quickly pulled right on the shoulder. I saw the culvert wall and tried to stop but the brakes failed. I immediately knew what she had done.

She didn’t trust me even after giving me a chance to kill her, she didn’t trust me. She set up this whole trip and swam so far out into the water on purpose, just so that I would get into the car. As I saw my life flashed before my eyes, I just thought to myself I should have seen this coming, she was a hell cat after all and this is what she does. Police on scene quickly ruled my wreckage an accident and Cara was not questioned.

When she got to the hospital she had a miscarriage. She no longer had any ties to me nor to the Greek. She was free and I guess that is all she truly wanted.